They look a bit lame: rephrase sentences to avoid them. Signed-off-by: Stefano Brivio <sbrivio(a)redhat.com> --- README.md | 39 +++++++++++++++++++-------------------- 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 8e07fb1..632ddd1 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -221,8 +221,9 @@ is needed as _passt_ runs without the `CAP_NET_RAW` capability: it can't create raw IP sockets on the pod, and therefore needs to map packets at Layer-2 to Layer-4 sockets offered by the host kernel. -The problem and this approach are illustrated in more detail, with diagrams, -[here](https://gitlab.com/abologna/kubevirt-and-kvm/-/blob/master/Networking.md). +See also a +[detailed illustration](https://gitlab.com/abologna/kubevirt-and-kvm/-/blob/master/Ne… +of the problem and what lead to this approach. ### pasta @@ -294,8 +295,8 @@ speeding up local connections, and usually requiring NAT. _pasta_: * 🛠️ ~5 000 LoC target * ⌚ [fuzzing](https://bugs.passt.top/show_bug.cgi?id=9), _packetdrill_ tests * ⌚ stricter [synflood protection](https://bugs.passt.top/show_bug.cgi?id=10) -* 💡 [your](https://lists.passt.top/) [ideas](https://bugs.passt.top/) - [here](https://chat.passt.top) +* 💡 [add](https://lists.passt.top/) [your](https://bugs.passt.top/) + [ideas](https://chat.passt.top) ### Configurability * ✅ all addresses, ports, port ranges @@ -304,8 +305,8 @@ speeding up local connections, and usually requiring NAT. _pasta_: * ✅ _pasta_: auto-detection of bound ports * 🛠 run-time configuration of port ranges without autodetection * 🛠 configuration of port ranges for autodetection -* 💡 [your](https://lists.passt.top/) [ideas](https://bugs.passt.top/) - [here](https://chat.passt.top) +* 💡 [add](https://lists.passt.top/) [your](https://bugs.passt.top/) + [ideas](https://chat.passt.top) ### Performance * ✅ maximum two (cache hot) copies on every data path @@ -416,9 +417,9 @@ destination address translated to the loopback address. ## Protocols _passt_ and _pasta_ support TCP, UDP and ICMP/ICMPv6 echo (requests and -replies). More details about the TCP implementation are available -[here](/passt/tree/tcp.c), and for the UDP -implementation [here](/passt/tree/udp.c). +replies). More details about the TCP implementation are described in the +[theory of operation](/passt/tree/tcp.c), and similarly for +[UDP](/passt/tree/udp.c). An IGMP/MLD proxy is currently work in progress. @@ -506,7 +507,7 @@ if (getComputedStyle(document.getElementById('ci'))['visibility'] == "visible") <p><a href="/builds/latest/web/ci.html">Continuous integration test run</a></p> </div> -Test logs [here](/builds/latest/test/). +See also the [test logs](/builds/latest/test/). ## Performance @@ -522,11 +523,10 @@ Test logs [here](/builds/latest/test/). cd passt make - * alternatively, static builds for x86_64 as of the latest commit are also - available for convenience [here](/builds/latest/x86_64/). Convenience, - non-official packages for Debian (and derivatives) and RPM-based - distributions are also available there. These binaries and packages are - simply built with: + * alternatively, [static builds]((/builds/latest/x86_64/) for x86_64 as of + the latest commit are also available for convenience. Non-official + packages for Debian (and derivatives) and RPM-based distributions are also + available there. These binaries and packages are simply built with: make pkgs @@ -581,11 +581,10 @@ Test logs [here](/builds/latest/test/). cd passt make - * alternatively, static builds for x86_64 as of the latest commit are also - available for convenience [here](/builds/latest/x86_64/). Convenience, - non-official packages for Debian (and derivatives) and RPM-based - distributions are also available there. These binaries and packages are - simply built with: + * alternatively, [static builds]((/builds/latest/x86_64/) for x86_64 as of + the latest commit are also available for convenience. Non-official + packages for Debian (and derivatives) and RPM-based distributions are also + available there. These binaries and packages are simply built with: make pkgs -- 2.35.1